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Day 3: Changing Perspectives

Thursday, November 3rd, 2011

(Reginald, you are going to get sick from all that candy!)

Word Count: 10019

Okay, out of the first chapter and now the kids are talking amongst themselves. I really do work better when there’s some people to work off of and Cassie’s not doing so well at holding my attention, interesting as she is as a character. So, break time with the students.

“Something is weird about her,” Jerry said quietly to Addie, who was working on a bit of vocabulary homework, trying to understand just what she was supposed to be doing.

“What?” Addie asked, looking up at her blue haired friend’s green eyes.

“Miss B,” he said. “You notice she keeps moving her hands weird?”

Addie shrugged, going back to her homework. Jerry kept pressing.

“I think there’s something going on,” Jerry said. “She knows something. You ever notice how this is the only room in the whole English wing that doesn’t have that weird cold draft? That one that you can only feel right on the back of your neck that goes down your spine?”

Addie kept her head down. She knew he was right. The only reason she wasn’t skipping Writing anymore was because she didn’t feel the things on her in here. Sure, they were in the hall still, but they weren’t in the classroom and Cassie was getting curious about why. That feeling, the draft, it followed her the whole way through her entire English career. She liked the class fine, but that feeling was weird and a little terrifying for some reason. She always felt like something was missing when it passed and, now that it wasn’t happening for the first time in three years, she wanted to stay at least long enough to figure out what was doing it. And Jerry had a point about Miss B seeming to be odd, so maybe she was the one doing it.

Still, she didn’t want to get her hopes up just yet. She was just starting to rediscover that she liked English as much as she did in middle school again and she wanted to enjoy it without worrying about whatever that feeling was. “Can’t you just be happy it’s not happening anymore?” she asked. “Maybe it just stops in grade 12.”

“Or maybe you need to stop pretending like nothing is going on,” Jerry hissed back insistently. “You know it’s not just nothing. Not everyone feels it, but both of us have. In this room. And now it’s gone and what’s different? Her. There is something going on here and it has to do with her.”

“I don’t really want to talk about this right now, Jer,” Addie told him.

“Hm,” they heard from behind them. Addie jumped and looked back to see Tommy lingering behind them, clearly listening but not willing to say anything. She blushed and turned right back to her homework, insisting not to look back up.

Day 2: Implied Tequila

Wednesday, November 2nd, 2011

(Reginald is stealing all of my cupcakes. I don’t think he’s going to let me have any.)

Word Count: 7008

I HAVE FINALLY ESCAPED THIS CHAPTER! And this is a nonsequitor that appeared.

They enjoyed the rest of their dinner, Ursula continuing to warn them about some of the students and tell some more stories about the school and classes. They exchanged horribly interesting back stories and generally had a good time with a couple of light drinks. They didn’t have too many because school was in the morning and a hang over on the second day was definitely not a good idea.

Although, perhaps it would be fun to stumble into class the next day still drunk from the night before. They could all go off to Mexico for the evening. Crossing two boarders would be a little difficult, though, and they had yet to receive their first paychecks for the year, though, so it would probably be an ill advised venture.

Still, they could probably drink until the place closed. Sammy and Sylvia weren’t so old yet that they didn’t know how to not drink like college students, still both seeming to be about college age. They could probably manage to drink the adults here under the table, though Cassie had no idea what Ursula was capable of. She was a bit of a light weight, though, and would need Wil to defend her honour when she fell early in the competition.

Not that they were doing any of that. They just finished dinner and went home instead.

Day 1: So. Nanowrimo.

Tuesday, November 1st, 2011

(Reginald likes cupcakes)

Word Count: 2448

I’ll be honest. it’s not starting off so well. I don’t have a good grasp on the plot and I don’t have the same amount of time in the day to just throw myself into the story. As such, I’m doing something a little different! Not the first words, but a different bit! Because the first words REALLY SUCK!

“Miss B,” one of the students piped in, hand in the air. He was surrounded by several others, the whole class seeming to come together for the challenge of deciding which curriculum she’d be teaching. “What’s Nanoreemo?”

“Nanowrimo,” she corrected him. “It’s short for National Novel Writing Month.”

“So we’d have to write a novel in a month?” he asked, a few other eyes following his own back to her.

“Not exactly,” she told them with a grin. “It’s only fifty thousand words.”

“So.. a novel,” he said back.

“More of a novella.”

“And we’d have to write it in a month,” he repeated.

“Yep.” She smiled back at them. “Read the whole description. You will be graded based on the percentage of the word count you complete. It’s supposed to get you to learn to write every day and take on a challenge. Plus, since it happens in November, it means that there won’t be a final for this class during December when the rest of your classes are handing them out.”

Silence. She knew she’d come to like that from this class.

“But how are we going to write anything good?” someone asked. Jerry, she knew, as he was in her English class that morning. “You’re not actually going to read them, are you?”

Cassie shook her head no, brushing away a creature that was coming for her. “I’ll skim them over to see if you just repeated one word over and over for fifty thousand words and run a couple checks to make sure they weren’t copied off the internet, but so long as the word count is done, it’s not going to matter whether or not they’re any good.”

Day 13: Mildly Depressing

Saturday, November 13th, 2010

So I’ve kind of done horrible things to my wrist and have been taking it a little easier on the writing for now. In other words, I’ve slowed right the hell down and it’s hard, but I’m wearing a thing on my wrist to keep it from hurting too much when I type. But that’s all right because I’m still going! And now, an excerpt topped off with mild depression.

Current Word Count: 55188

“Where’s T been in all of this?” he asked suddenly, as if only realizing she hadn’t broken out into random one sided conversation yet. “I keep talking to R, but you’ve been pretty quiet.”

“She’s sleeping,” Shea said, shrugging. “But she has been really quiet today. Maybe something’s wrong, I don’t know. She’s usually up and following around with me all day. You don’t think voices get sick, do you?”

Matt opened his mouth to say something comforting when he closed his eyes, wincing a little and grabbing at his head. His hand rubbed at his temple and he looked like he was getting angry. “Would you stop that?!” he demanded, clearly trying to get R to behave inside his head and not having it work.

“What’s going on?” Shea asked, concerned.

“I don’t think they get sick,” Matt said, completely deadpan. He smacked himself in the head. “Also, R is a psychopath right now.”

“Oh,” Shea said, going quiet and feeling a little bad about making Matt have to deal with that. It was her fault for asking a stupid question, after all. Or just making a stupid statement in general. T was never sick. There was nothing that would ever believe her to think so, except that today she was behaving a little oddly. Still, Shea may have been out for a day and T’s sleeping schedule didn’t adjust along with hers. That was probably all it was. T would be around that night to talk and they could sort things out.

Matt directed them to a door and they made their way inside the dining hall, ordered food and got a section of table to themselves where Matt could watch the rest of the room and they could continue to talk. This was the longest anyone had voluntarily hung out with her without having Chris around before.

Day 10: 50K!

Wednesday, November 10th, 2010

I hit 50K! And I’m stopping tonight at exactly 50K because my wrist is killing me and I need to get up for a 5am shift tomorrow. But, in the mean time, here’s the last chunk of the word count. My 50,000th word is “all.”

Current Word Count: 50,000

Matt let out a noise and put his eyes back on the page. She glanced over and saw that he wasn’t quite as far along as she was, but decided to be polite about it at least. After all, the two of them were being shoved together as partners and it probably wasn’t best to annoy him this early on.

“How far did you get?” Shea asked. “In the book, I mean. What chapter did you end up on before you said something and ended up here.”

“Oh,” Matt said, hesitating. “I kind of just flip through and work off random pages. I’m not really doing the specific order thing or anything. Just picking up things here and there and reading the theory bits and making it up as I go along. It’s like learning a language, right? Once you get how to make sentences, the rest of it is just vocab.”

Shea nodded, not sure how to take it. He didn’t have a method? He was just going randomly though the book? Could you really pick up all of this like that? It was a magic spell book with gradually increasing theory. It didn’t make sense to her that anyone could do it like that.

And yet Matt continued to do so, flipping from page to page, reading a couple words and then flipping through to another one to read a couple more. He seemed to be picking something up, anyway, though she had no idea how he was getting any of it at all.

Day 8: The Fun Part

Tuesday, November 9th, 2010

Yeah, I’ve been out for the past few days. I haven’t been home to update, but here’s the next bit now! Also, I’ve discovered that I’m rather not good with this slice of life stuff, so I’m quite happy that the whole reality thing is about to completely go away very soon. And in the morning, I shall get to finish this scene and the stuff I know will begin!

Current Word Count: 37289

When Shea came back, she was standing and T was quiet again in the back of her mind. She stepped back to catch herself, the world very slowly coming back into focus as she leaned back against something that moved under her touch and felt like she was outside despite the lack of breeze. Come to think of it, she could smell the trees, which struck her as very odd.

She leaned against whatever it was, anyway, waiting for her vision to come back and her mind to clear. She didn’t have her backpack on anymore and she couldn’t hear the others, so she assumed that she must have run, though how it happened she wasn’t sure. What had happened? She was hazy on those last moments, but remembered the fist coming at her and T saying something.

Maybe they’d beaten her up and left her in the woods to see what would happen to her. It was probably hard to carry her body out, at any rate, and she hoped something bad happened to them along the way. Though she didn’t actually feel all that terrible. Just a little weak and dizzy. It was like the punch to the face never connected, which would be a feat. She couldn’t even dodge a ball in class, much less a fist. Maybe she was just numb, though.

Slowly, though, there were more odd things coming to light. Like the face that she saw a wall and the door that she had been pulled into. She looked down at herself, finding her hands to be trembling a little, as were her knees and legs, but she was otherwise fine. She just needed a minute to rest and figure out what happened to her. She just needed to find her backpack too and maybe she could head home while she was being left alone. Home was close now and she shouldn’t have to worry about them anymore. Maybe a teacher came by and scared them off.

She went to the wall and leaned against it, raising her head to look for her backpack and her eyes opened wide upon seeing what happened in the room. Her voice escaped her before she’d properly registered what had even happened in there, a scream coming out of her from seeing what had happened and not understanding what she was seeing yet.

No one had left. Everyone was still there. They were just unconscious and trapped in strange plants that had grown out of nowhere at all, the plants looking like they’d strangled them into unconsciousness before letting them relax and breathe again. She could see the breathing clearly enough, shallow though it was, the vines gripping them all around to keep them from moving and still holding some of them much harder than others to restrain them.

Shea had her back against the wall, collapsing against it and falling slowly down to the floor when someone burst in. It doesn’t matter which teacher, who was horrified at the sight and looked down at Shea, who was equally mortified at what was going on. Shea, confused and unable to string a word together, couldn’t get a grasp on what was even happening, the situation too bizarre to contemplate and process for her mind. The vines came literally out of nowhere, The roots of them were actually suspended an inch above the ground and not in anything at all. And her teacher rescuer was of no help either, looking down to Shea and back up at the students in awe and not sure what to do in case of magical growing vines attacking students.

Day 4: All kinds of breaking the 4th wall

Thursday, November 4th, 2010

A bit early in the day, but I just wrote this very shareable chunk and I’m worried that I’ll forget about it later. So here’s the bit for today! And also I AM FINALLY OUT OF THAT STORY WITHIN THE STORY! WOOT!

Current Word Count: 12796

She turned on her playlist and started to type, the music setting the mood of a generally fun romp through the forest and battling the bad guys. Despite the word limit, she wrote the whole story, her fingers moving much faster over the keys than mine are now. Dammit, I’m getting slow. Still, the story came out quickly now that she knew who the characters generally were, and T was there to fill in anything she missed, like the character names and little details that Shea wanted to include. This would be the version that went in her own collection, after all, and she wanted that one to be pretty good. Especially since she was going to have to figure out where in the chronology this one fit.

Two hours later, she was trimming the story down to the five pages she was allowed to submit for class. Because, you know, time doesn’t exist the way it’s supposed to. Let’s make it about 8 at this point and say that she had a laptop to work on it while she was making dinner. Well, even then. Say 9 then. And then she can start looking at the book at 10. Wow, this time thing is getting a little complicated. Maybe she should have just had that one bit of homework for the night. It seems pretty ridiculous otherwise.

My god, why am I thinking about this now?

So, she finishes the story, both versions and prints it off. Well, prints off the school version of it. Story continue now? Yes? Good.

Day 3: Still there

Wednesday, November 3rd, 2010

I have seriously been completely exhausted the past 5 or so days and it’s hindering my word count. I need to start sleeping more or something because this is just getting ridiculous. My word count is suffering!

Current Word Count: 11750

The village was called Trefalda. They has the strange problem of seeing apparitions of people who’d already passed away show up at random in the town. The ghosts would always come only to take things from them, though, saying they had forgotten it, and they would leave. After the people had gotten over the shock of their ead relatives coming back to visit and take their change purses and supplies from the pantry, they started to get a little suspicious of the whole matter.

Torana was travelling with Renald at the time, a young boy who had a lot to prove and no one to prove it to until Torana came along. He wanted to do everything his own way, so Torana had her work cut out for her keeping him out of trouble, even if he was more than old enough to be able to make it all on his own in the world. There were still more dangers out there than he would admit, not wanting to appear as less that completely competent.

The happened across the town for no particular reason. They had just slain the dragon, which wasn’t alive at all, and were looking for a nice quiet place to recover from that little misadventure for a while and Trefalda happened to be there. They went and stayed in the inn, but heard about the ghosts soon enough.

Renald wanted to go see what it was right away. Torana, tired from the journey, went to sleep while Renald decided to head out and try to find one of these ghosts. He did just that, finding a young girl trying to follow after her dead brother, who vanishes just as Renald got there. She told him that her brother had taken her money and she was very cross with him.

Renald tried to figure out what the ghost really was, his deductive reasoning skills, which consisted entirely of asking the little girl about the weird things she’d seen in town, and she told him about the men who had set up camp in the forest a little ways away. People had been going in and going missing. The girl even revealed that all the ghosts appearing were people who had died going into the forest.

And so, being Renald, he went right into the forest without going back to check with anyone, telling only the little girl who only knew that she was supposed to find the new woman staying at the inn and tell her where he’d gone. He hadn’t even told the girl what his name was. She just went home when he went to the forest.

Day 2: Story in Story

Tuesday, November 2nd, 2010

So I wasn’t around much today and ended up talking about the internal story that has little to do with the rest of the story until a bit later. And then, still not much to do with the story. So here’s part of the back story exposition of what’s happening in the story.

Current Word Count: 10012

The stories were about Torana, an elf who seemed to have the uncanny ability to pick up curses. She grew up in a tribe of other elf children studying magic so that they could go out and be the mages in the human courts, advising the other species in their own way and making sure the lands were not too corrupted by their tendency towards curiosity. During her trial by fire, the last trial in that bracket of trials she had to undertake, something had gone wrong and she was transported to a place that had never even heard of elves and was surrounded by people who found the markings on her face to be something evil and wicked. She had to hide away until someone finally gave her shelter in an old lighthouse.

The elderly couple there were a nice enough pair, but no match for what had come for them in the night. An immortal wanted the room they had and would not accept that there was already a girl in there. They could do nothing to stop him from attempting to take it and get rid of the poor scared child inside. She was attacked and managed to not only fight him off, but somehow kill him in the process. She’d used magic to decapitate him, his head falling into the fire. Freaked out by the dead body, she threw it out the window and into the ocean, but couldn’t take the smell of the head roasting in the fireplace.

She ran from the place and kept running until she found a nice, safe sanctuary in the form of a library and monastery housed in a castle they were slowly rebuilding. Torana was accepted there despite her appearance and stayed there for a century. She learned a great deal, like how to fight and how the world worked, as well as this world’s magic. She even slowly came to terms with the fact that she wasn’t even in her own world anymore, seeing as no one had even heard of the elves in this place before. Nonetheless, she had a life there and everything was good, though they even noticed that there was something odd about her. She had been there a century and barely aged a day. Maybe it was because she was an elf, a strange creature that didn’t exist in their world, or maybe it was something else.

Torana knew, though, that this wasn’t normal. She would have told them about that eventually, but a war had been brewing between the lands for a while now and it came to the monastery. The non-violence of the people who lived there made them very easy to take. Torana was hidden away against her will at the start, the people there knowing that she would be targeted for her odd appearance. She was not kept away for that long, but long enough to have the people within slaughtered. When she got out, it was already too late and she was furious. The details, T never really went in to, but it was a very bloody end for the people who tried to take the place over.

Day 1: Padding Already

Monday, November 1st, 2010

It’s day one of Nanowrimo. I’m on auto pilot on the videos for the month and I’m doing an excerpt a day, just like last year. And here’s the padding from today! Posted early because, well, I don’t want to worry about it as I keep going into the night.

Current Word Count: 5511

Shea got off the bus. Someone else had hit the button and she pushed through the crowd of people which suddenly appeared so that I could add in more words. It smelled of the bus, the aroma thick with the smell of people who both had and had not showered, then were well ventilated because the windows were open enough to keep things from getting that smelly. Really, the aroma wasn’t that bad, but there were definitely people.

Shea made a point not to look up too often on the bus. She worried that peering around would garner eye contact with someone that she didn’t want to make eye contact with, but she brushed past a good number of people on the way out. Some of them were wearing nice jackets, others not so much. Some she knocked the bags and purses of. Some were sitting. Some were listening to music on headphones. A lot of them were, actually. And a few were on phones.

Not that it made much difference, because Shea wasn’t really looking at them. She just wanted to get off the bus and made her way off of it from her seat near the back to the back door.

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