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The Next Month

Saturday, October 31st, 2009

I’m going to be plotting today, but I’m not telling you anything. As if I’ve said anything up to this point anyway, right? So here’s what I’m going to do instead.

An excerpt a day.

Every day I write, I’ll post a little bit of what I’ve written for anyone who is interested and you can try and string everything together that way. It’s horrible first draft stuff, granted, and it’s probably going to be just as mind bogglingly bad as that one I posted last year, but there’s going to be a little chunk of story posted every day I write.

And that is going to be an important qualifier, I think. Mostly because I will work and some days the writing won’t happen. It’s happened in the past and I’m sure it will happen again. These things happen and I do need money for Christmas, so no blowing off work. As much as I would probably rather be writing.

There will be no comic reviews or videos for the next month for I shall be writing. There will only be story. Only Raven Project. First 50K, then I finish the story. Wish me luck.

I’m going to get ready for the kickoff now. You guys have fun and… try not to die over the next month.

Raven Project: Setting

Friday, October 30th, 2009

Okay, so time for a bit of a confession. I’m cheating on the setting this year. I’m using a real place and an actual time for this all to take place this year. Yes, I know, it’s not really cheating, but it feels like it to me. I usually make up a new setting and set it in an ambient time somewhere, but this time around, it’s set in a place and time I know.

The time is 2004. It’s the start of the school year and, if I remember rightly, a very pivotal fall for a certain university campus. SFU Surrey finally got the funding to move into a brand new campus now floating above the mall, looking down on the patrons instead of hiding away in a corner from them. The campus was supposed to be an architectural wonder, but the students shifting to the new system was a little more important on the level of our characters.

Methinks I’m going to have to avoid a little bit of soap boxing while I’m writing this year. Or maybe go with it, since it will do awesome for my word count.

The old Betaspace was left behind, looked back with different opinions by different people. The older the student it seemed, the more they missed the little hole in the wall. The younger, the more they were looking forward to the new, huge campus. Or so I remember it.

Betaspace, however, has not been forgotten in this story. It still plays quite a big part, even if the vast majority of the characters are first year and have never been. Terrible, horrible things await them there.

Er… I mean…

Candy. Candy and cake await them. Yes.

Raven Project: Cast

Thursday, October 29th, 2009

There’s only a few days left until Nanowrimo. As such, it’s time to actually get started on a little planning. So let’s start with the characters.

Lira Ebon
A 19 year old former gymnast, she’s started in university in hopes of finding something else to do with her life. She is full grown at 4’4″ and seems to be grossly underweight at 68 pounds, though her physique seems normal. She’s also a vegetarian not for any ethical reasons but because she can’t seem to digest meat.

She was adopted by the Ebon family as a child, who have treated her well and given her a good childhood. Besides having to be rushed to the hospital on several occasions due to very fragile bones, she has lead a relatively normal life.

Morgan Beau
He’s started at university because it’s what his parents wanted him to do, but Morgan doesn’t see that as much of an obstacle towards his objective of trying to find the good life where he doesn’t have to work and everything will just work out for him in the end. He has a bit of a nervous twitch now and then, seeming to know things are coming, but will usually brush those off fairly easily.

Morgan has two basic settings to his personality. He’s either cheery, laid back and tries not to worry about anything or he’s tired, grumpy and full of pessimistic and snappy comebacks for any suggestion made.

Jayde Ng
A fairly outgoing young woman, she is a bit of a girly girl, though keeps her strong opinions and holds her own very well. She is currently working in customer service and is working hard to maintain both grades as well as a job while she is in school, hoping to soon move out and earn her independence. Ever an overachiever, she is set on maintaining a high GPA regardless.

She wears brown colour contacts to cover her strange eyes, one of which is golden. She’s quite self conscious of this and usually keeps a spare contact on her just in case to hide the abnormality.

Shane Towers
Laid back yet strangely grounded for someone his age, he seems to be a quick study and works hard to keep his grades up, though he also is more than willing to go around finding a party if he has simply had enough with work for the day. He’s very social and has a habit to use rather bad puns in conversation to lighten the mood.

Shane has a tendency to get overprotective and worry heavily for the well being of others when given the opportunity. He tries hard not to meddle, but wants people to be well so long as he is around and can sometimes mother people and get on their nerves.

Calvin Chen
He was raised in an international school in Hong Kong along with his brother who had left for school a year before. He was happy to be sent to join his brother at school, though he rarely ever mentions him now that he’s here. He does the work given to him in class as asked, but is uncertain about the educational path hes chosen to pursue.

He’s getting used to life on the other side of the ocean fairly quickly, taking on the punk fashion and getting himself used to the culture in that way. He’s a bit quiet, though nice enough if you actually talk to him.

Liz Lovel
A year older than the rest, she’s here to show them around and get them used to the ropes. She’s actually a pretty quiet person for the most part, though helpful and anxious to show them the lighter side of school life.

She’s another girl who’s lead a perfectly average life. She has a few allergies that make it seem she’s sick some of the time, but the majority of the time she will brush it off and continue on with the group, lending a hand where it’s needed and usually trying to take a back seat and let everyone else try for themselves.

So, nice normal characters with nice, normal lives. All of them are just starting their first year of university. I am going to have so much fun breaking their poor little minds.

Of course, I’m lying about a few of the characters too…

First Draft Zombies

Monday, October 26th, 2009

While on the forums, someone asked about turning off their inner editor. It seems like a simple enough thing. You just keep going onwards and don’t look back until you’re done. I equated it to zombies, which means now I need to elaborate.

When writing the first draft of anything, I’d suggest never looking back. It’s hard for some people to do, I know. You want it to be perfect the first time, but first drafts are rarely ever masterpieces and they will almost always need heavy editing. You could spend hours making it perfect the first time, or you could have fun with it the first time.

I like to write now and edit later, as I now realize that my first drafts will usually suck. Let it come out as it comes out and don’t worry too much about editing. If you can help it, don’t edit at all, leave it raw and then you can go back afterwards and fix everything if the story is worth it.

Like zombies.

Think of your story like a city infested with zombies out for your brains. The more you write, the closer you get to the chopper to get out of there. Unfortunately, these are running zombies and they’re always right behind you. Don’t look back, just keep writing/running until you get to the end/chopper. You can make it! YOU CAN DO IT!

Then you’re at the chopper. Now you can look back at your story infested by zombies. There’s grammar and spelling mistakes, plot holes and character inconsistencies. That’s fine. It’s what the first draft is for. You are safe now, it’s done. Take a breath, get back to society and remember what it’s like to be around normal people.

Then, when you’re very ready, go back to the zombies. And bring ammunition. Take your bombs/red pen and tear the whole thing apart. Keep going until it’s all good and inhabitable again.

Although by this metaphor, it follows that your mistakes create zombies. I guess the metaphor still works.

Run like hell, leaving zombies in your wake and make it to the chopper at the end. Look back and risk getting eaten by the zombies with no hope of ever reaching the chopper. Sure, you can turn back and kill a couple that are breathing on your neck, but don’t fight the whole army. Once you reach the chopper, recuperate some and come back with the big guns and bombs that will kill them all.

Why yes, I am still looking for my notebook.

Projects Page

Monday, October 19th, 2009

As many of you know due to my incessant chatter about it on occasion, I like to write stories. Lots of them. Unfortunately, time doesn’t permit me to work on all of them at the same time, so they’re largely contained to notebooks until the mood strikes. Once that happens, then I get to go nuts and make awesome things happen by writing them all.

For a while now, I’ve wanted to keep an online log of everything I’m working on and how far along I am, since notebooks aren’t a very good gauge of how far along on a project I am. And now, I’ve created a monster of an index of everything that either I’m currently working on or will be working on over the rest of my life, well into old age because that’s how long it will take to get it all done. The projects page, ladies and gentlemen, is a list of every not-short story I have in my head right now that I want to get out of my head at one point or another, a little detail on some of the various characters and settings as well as how I plan on implementing them. And, you know, how far along I am on the thing.

I don’t know if this is going to be of any interest to anyone other than me, though, to be perfectly honest. Still, it’s up and ready for anyone who’s willing to have a gander at the thoughts and ideas in my head. You may note that none of the Nanowrimo options are currently in there. That is simply because the poll isn’t closed yet and I honestly don’t want you to know anything about the stories when you’re voting. It’s more fun for me that way. They’ll probably go in once December rolls around.

Dammit Plot Bunny

Wednesday, October 14th, 2009

As always seems to happen when I’m waiting for Nanowrimo to get here, I have a plot bunny. It’s an idea for a series and something that I’ve touched on before.

Alice in Wonderland.

For some reason, I’m coming up with ideas on how to make it a whole series about Alice trying to free Wonderland. Wonderland has been plunged into darkness and is starting to claim other worlds. The white rabbit comes to plead for her help and Alice goes, but fails to save Wonderland in book one. What she does manage to do, however, is learn that the dark force behind Wonderland moved into Neverland. She leaves as they’re taking it over and takes with her their ability to open their boarders into other realms. Too late for Neverland now, but when she leaves, she takes their ability to expand into her world any longer.

Book two not only does she realize that she did this, but she meets the first refugee. Peter Pan ran away from Neverland. She tries to hide him and he pleads with her to come back with him and save his home. This fails, as does her attempt to hide her at the school and he’s sent away into foster care until they can locate his parents. Which they won’t be able to and he is soon enough out of their care, but vanished for the time being. That or he’ll become her flying cat and she’ll be utterly unable to break that curse.

She’ll also encounter Arthur, who will be able to assimilate into school with her thanks to Snow White due to that subplot.  And others will probably show up throughout the series. meanwhile, Alice is going to slowly grow magical and more powerful, probably fall in love once or twice if I can figure out how to do romance non-cheesy and eventually take on the big bad of the series.

It all takes place at a boarding school. Alice was sent off because of Wonderland in the first place. Borrowing from the Wizard of Oz sequel a little, she’s sent away because she became obsessed with Wonderland upon her return and her parents couldn’t take it. So they sent her away and she returns home on occasion, though not often as now her parents are travelling constantly and she will often not see them for years on end. She suspects that they may have separated and neglected to tell her too. They are awfully busy with work, after all.

Or something. We’ll plot this thing out proper once November ends and I have a little Christmas time inspiration.

Rejection Letter Happy Dance!

Monday, October 12th, 2009

I got a rejection letter. And I am happy. Unironically so.

As some of you might know, I write and would greatly like to get published one of these days. I’m working towards that already, sending out short stories to various publishers in hopes that one day someone will read it and like it.

So far, I’ve gotten a lot of rejection letters and will soon need a new box because this one’s a little shallow. This is pretty normal, and I haven’t been all that upset about them. They’ve been form rejections for the most part to this point, maybe with a note or two about what they didn’t like and that’s about it. Other than that, it’s the standard photocopied rejection letter with a signature. I was starting to think that I was screwing up somewhere in the submission process.That or I just really sucked.

On Friday, though, I got another rejection that made me ecstatic.

First off, it was thicker than usual. Not that surprising, really. Every once in a while they’ll send it back with a page of your story or a pamphlet for the magazine. I read through the letter and it was odd. They said they passed it up to the editors for further consideration. That isn’t usually written in these rejections.Then it rounded off with a please submit again, which is. It was odd, but I didn’t think too much of it.

And then I flipped the page and there was a letter there. Written by hand. At this point, I dropped it and squeaked. It had a hand written rejection letter attached! Not just that, but when I picked it up again, there was a second one behind it! It took me a day to calm down enough to actually read them.

Hand written rejection letters are amazing. They had feedback, specific points and that feeling that they had taken the time to read it and consider it. Considering some places don’t send rejections at all, the hand written ones are the ones that I hold and want to frame.I am so ridiculously proud of myself for getting to the point where someone would do that for me.

That and I’m grateful that someone would take the time to write something like that. A hand written… I am still so happy over it. Awestruck too. I don’t know what else to say.

I need to write them a thank you letter now. I really do.

This Year’s Options

Wednesday, September 30th, 2009

So it’s getting closer and closer to November and I’m looking into my options for what to write this year. The list was initially ten options long, but I took out the ones that I’ve only had the concept for a year. I should be getting the older ones written first, right?

And if you notice these have different types of summaries, I copied last years over that didn’t get written and added to the list.

Please vote in the sidebar for the one I should write.

Arcleo
Traditional fantasy story where I get to make a prophesy absolutely meaningless. The main character is a vapid selfish girl who wants to be princess and is convinced that she is the true princess of an overtaken land not because of the mark on her arm (The one that’s supposed to mark the princess but appeared on every baby girl in the neighboring lands) but because she thinks she deserves better than hard work in an inn for the rest of her life.

Raven Project

A class of first year university students get subjected to genetic experimentation and do pretty much nothing about it. They’re scared, don’t know what to do and have seen the footage of the last class who tried to fight and run away getting mowed down along with the rest of their families. And that last class looked a lot like they did. Told from the perspective of the least likely success of the story, a girl who, with the help of a serum and a few long moments of agony, can grow a forty foot long wingspan.

Background Noise
Once upon a time there was a sad little lonely girl. She got a voice in her head. That voice wouldn’t go away when she grew up and she was the only teenager with imaginary friends. She also had a book of words she had to memorize and never say, but that didn’t make sense so she never really did it. And then she got whisked away to a weird place where a big monster immediately attacked her and she realized the voice in her head was telling the truth (Or she had gone insane) and everything goes to shit. And then gets better. Yay!

Darkling

This one focuses around Rin, a lovely young girl who everyone wants dead because it’s time for the chosen one to be sacrificed, though no one knows she’s the chosen one yet. So her friends are looking for the chosen one so they can kill her properly, the bad guys are looking for her because if they kill her first they win and her mother is just pissed off with her one night and randomly beats her shitless.

Creatures in the Halls
Sandra is a new teacher at the school, but already she has made quite the impact on several students. These students know that the school is haunted by something and that she seems to not only know that these things are there, but knows how to get rid of them. There’s something more at work here, though, and Sandra can only do so much at once. Though she tries to defend the students and purify the school, others may have to take her place if she falls to the creatures.

FFTS 2
After Aiden returned from backpacking for the last several months, he returned to find his best friend had gone missing for several months and refuses to talk about it. They start at school only to find not only does Caelin already know several people, but they have history. Aiden, meanwhile, discovers some new things about himself and becomes entwined in a conflict where he is missing several peices of background information like who these people are, what is Carcer and why are they all terrified of the girl who seems scared just to be outside?

NaNoWriMo Guide

Wednesday, October 15th, 2008

So Nanowrimo is obviously on my mind a lot right about now. Which means I have started preparing and trying to encourage several other people to join along with me again this year because the experience is wonderful.

This year, however, I’m putting together my own survival guide. For myself and for everyone else so much as thinking about taking on the challenge.

Don’t Panic – Like the Hitchhiker’s Guide, NaNoWriMo is a daunting task for a lot of people. The word count seems insurmountable. 50,000 words is an impossible task, right? It is, however, only 1,667 words a night. Depending on your typing speed and your inspiration at that moment, it can be as little as an hour a night for a month. Maybe more, maybe less. But not nearly as much time as you think.

You are not Alone – Around the world, thousands of people are doing exactly the same thing. Some of them veterans with words of wisdom and many of them newbies and first timers approaching it with the same fear and wonderment as many of the veterans. The forums are a wonderful place to utilize for help if you need anything over the course of your novel.

Busy is Good – It seems counterintuitive, but being busy does amazing things for your writing. It’s also easier to write when you are busy. No, really. Please stop laughing. Making sure you don’t spend every waking moment on the book will keep you interested in the story. If it is something you do when you aren’t working, it will seem more like play. And if you do nothing but write for the month with nothing else, you are likely to lose interest because that’s all there is to do. And if it’s all there is to do, it’s less likely you will do it.

Do Some Preparation – Also important. Especially if you’re worried about the word count. Nanowrimo allows you to do as much preparation as you want before November 1st, so you can come out with outlines, full character sketches, whatever you need to do to get your story ready. You can have everything ready to go before the end of the month so in the middle, there’s no chance of getting stuck.

But it Won’t be Good! – No it will not, in all likelihood. Get over it. Your first draft is never good, it will always need rewrites and you do not get to the rewrite and editing phases where your story actually becomes good if you never have a first draft to start out with.

Writing Totems – This is a personal favourite. Find something to wear every single time you write. Like Pavlov with his dog, you will train yourself to write when you wear these. When these are worn, they will instantly transform you into a real writer, capable of creating marvellous stories, characters and plotlines. You will do no wrong. And when they’re off, you can go back to your normal life. Simple as that.

The Head Start – The beginning of the month is when people tend to be the most motivated. At the start of the month, try to get as much writing as you possibly can. This will be a bit of a buffer in case something comes up later in the month and you will be grateful for it.

Check Your Inner Editor at the Door – You shouldn’t be editing during Nanowrimo. This isn’t the time for things like that. he point of Nanowrimo is to give you a head start on a novel that you can later go through and edit in full. No novel or story, no matter how much time you put into it and how careful you are, will go unedited, so forget all about editing for this first draft. Focus instead on getting it done, ploughing ahead and never looking back.

November First Candy Outing – November 1st is the day after Halloween. Go buy lots of discount candy on a break from your day one writing. Nanowrimo is a bit of a marathon and the sugar rush can be very good when you just need that extra little kick. Or, it can be used as…

Incentives – Good deeds should be rewarded. Milestones, more so. Come up with your own marks on the trail to 50K (Word counts and plot points work rather well) on a sheet of paper. And next to each milestone, write what you will give yourself for every mark. First thousand words? Chocolate bar. Half way thorugh? A day off in the city to shop for that new computer. Finished? Burn the computer! Okay, maybe not that, but it’s good to reward yourself for a job well done. Or a milestone hit, anyway.

Pace yourself – Nanowrimo is a bit of a marathon. It’s undoubtedly long and the word count can be daunting. So while you’re working on it, make sure you don’t burn out and give yourself breathing room. If you can’t do anymore that night, put it to rest and get some rest. It will still be there in the morning. Inspirational burnout is a good thing to avoid, so try not to push yourself too hard, especially on your first year.

Don’t be Afraid of Tangents – In Nanowrimo, the goal is to try and get your word count as high as possible in a short amount of time. This means writing down any idea you have. This means sometimes letting the characters do things you haven’t planned for them. If your characters suddenly decide to hop in the car and take an unexpected roadtrip through time, let them. Who knows? The tangent they take you on might prove to be an interesting story. And if not, there’s nothing saying that it wasn’t all a dream.

Getting Ahead – Great for you! Don’t get cocky, though. If you aren’t done yet, then remember there’s more yet to do. You can breathe easier now, but try to keep the pace going until you’re actually done. Nothing’s final until that word count is validated.

Falling Behind – DON’T PANIC! You’ll be okay. There’s a lot of tips out there about how to quickly add to your word count when you fall behind. You just have to be a little creatively underhanded.

  • Word Padding – This technique is the easiest to learn. It is simply trying to jam as many words as possible into a sentence. These words are often completely unnecessary in order to increase word count. This works especially well with description.
  • Meanwhile… – Sick of the story? Want a break to work on some other idea? The word “Meanwhile” allows you to go on completely random tangents with no affiliation to your main plot. With it, you could even write two stories at once.
  • Incorporate That Academia – If you are a student with papers due in November, try to incorporate them into your novel! Say there’s a student in the story who also coincidentally has to write or read a paper. Bam! Excuse to put the paper into your novel.
  • Search and Replace – The desperate last resort of those on their last week and very far behind, or those who are just worried in general, search and replace is powerful if used well. Find a name, then replace it with their full, thirteen word name for the entire story. Or replace “they will” with “they might. Maybe. Probably… or will they? Perhaps they won’t and that would be awfully troublesome if they didn’t but they probably will cave and they will” if you really need to. Every single time it shows up. It can help.

Be Social! – On the forums, you can often find people living near you who are also taking on the same daunting word count of a novel. These people are likely to hold social events of sorts, such as meet ups and write ins, that you can go to. For a little while, you can talk to likeminded people who know exactly what you’re going through and can help you along, or you can help them if they are in distress about their own novel. Or you can just chat. Or write!

Don’t be Afraid of Failure – Failure is always a possibility. If you don’t make it at the end of the month, don’t worry! You are not alone! Sometimes it happens. Nanowrimo is hard. But now, you have the beginnings of a novel that you can continue to work on at your own pace. A good head start. Or maybe you’ve written enough to know you don’t want to write it anymore. Both situations you would not be in if you never undertook this, which isn’t too bad of an outcome. And you can always try again next year now that you know the basics.

Finishing the Word Count – Congratulations! You’re done! Your story might not be complete, but you will have gotten a good way into your story by now and have a decent chunk of it done. You’ve done well. You can rest for a little while, say hello to all those loved ones you’ve left behind and let your mind take a break from the story. Or you can keep going. Your choice really. You’ve already won Nanowrimo. Download your swag and be sure to tell everyone you know you’ve just written a novel.

Nanowrimo

Tuesday, September 23rd, 2008

Technically, this is a Nano thing, so it’s a writing prompt. Category right. Baha. And I’m not waiting til tomorrow! I wish this was in cam form so you could hear me actually rant and ramble. It’s so much more fun that way. But ah well, until the computer gets fixed.

Nanowrimo is coming and I have several projects to choose from to work on for the month and get done for once. And I never know which one to do, so I’m going to try and leave that up to everyone but me for the moment. As in anyone reading this. So here are the stories and a little blurb on them all.

Arcleo
Traditional fantasy story where I get to make a prophesy absolutely meaningless. The main character is a vapid selfish girl who wants to be princess and is convinced that she is the true princess of an overtaken land not because of the mark on her arm (The one that’s supposed to mark the princess but appeared on every baby girl in the neighboring lands) but because she thinks she deserves better than hard work in an inn for the rest of her life.

Raven Project
A class of first year university students get subjected to genetic experimentation and do pretty much nothing about it. They’re scared, don’t know what to do and have seen the footage of the last class who tried to fight and run away getting mowed down along with the rest of their families. And that last class looked a lot like they did. Told from the perspective of the least likely success of the story, a girl who, with the help of a serum and a few long moments of agony, can grow a forty foot long wingspan.

Background Noise
Once upon a time there was a sad little lonely girl. She got a voice in her head. That voice wouldn’t go away when she grew up and she was the only teenager with imaginary friends. She also had a book of words she had to memorize and never say, but that didn’t make sense so she never really did it. And then she got whisked away to a weird place where a big monster immediately attacked her and she realized the voice in her head was telling the truth (Or she had gone insane) and everything goes to shit. And then gets better. Yay!

Transmundane
Once upon a time a girl managed to remember the strangest dreams. Dreams where these people came in and took her out into the rest of the collective subconscious to try and keep people from going around and “fixing” other people’s subconscious. And then it started to happen while she was daydreaming too. But she could do more in them now that she was getting used to it. And then, one day she got into an accident and got stuck there. Or maybe she didn’t. I haven’t decided yet.

Genetically Impaired
Damien is a jackass and he doesn’t die. This is how he got to be immortal, from plowing a car into a shoddily made building in the middle of the forest to his escape, recapture, and how he opened up their doors to human experimentation. And supposed ethical treatment of them too. Ethical, of course, meaning they would live like kings and never be allowed outside if they managed to physically maim them in any way, which they usually did.

Sybil of Destiny
In the distant future a war no one remembers has destroyed most of the world. Those who are left liner in small refuge shelters, trying to maintain themselves, save other survivors and keep from getting raided. Upon the recovery of a strange young woman from the mountains who appears to not have come to any harm in the fallout, they ponder over what the hell is going on. And how she’s managing to do the things she does. Oh, and she’s a Sue, but this is a fun Sue story.

Darkling
Another Sue story. This one focuses around Rin, a lovely young girl who everyone wants dead because it’s time for the chosen one to be sacrificed. So her friends are looking for the chosen one so they can kill her properly, the bad guys are looking for her because if they kill her first they win and her mother is just pissed off with her one night and randomly beats her shitless.

Atlantis Project
A top secret, formerly government funded experiment has been invaded by small children. This is the story of the children who managed to break in, run through and sneak into the gate to what they called Atlantis, a strange land where the world has been destroyed. The people are aliens that are horribly racist/classist against their own kind and technologically advanced. Humans with poor immune systems that come through, however, discover that they develop strange powers that are supposed to be used to help the people as per contract. As kids unbound by contract, however, they make their own way,

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